5top, Turn Around...Hear the silence...I'm speaking.
Your brilliant eyes flash with fire
Your spirit is always fighting
But you're beginning to tire
I can see it in your face, smiling
You eyes drift in a different direction
Your shoulders are slumped
When they aren't looking, you lose your expression
What's holding you back, my artistic boy?
Your pen strikes the paper, night is nigh
You work your heart and soul
Perfection is all you want, you try and try
Reaching, even though it's all cold
Your ocean of thoughts are hidden behind
Eyes that glimmer in the spotlight
It's obvious that you are trying your best to find
Why you've been blinded by tonight
They don't know, I don't know
But I still see it, somewhere, a quiet crying
Not the kind you put on for show
But inside, you're dying, my stoic, silent writer.
Flash a smile, make a confession
You're front and center, and you don't know why
You feel like this is all misdirection
A grand plot to make you continue living the lie
You know that this isn't the way a righteous man
Acts when given such a gift, but now
You want to keep that place, you continue to stand
Even though you know you should bow
Truth is slapping in your face, yet you turn away
You want to stay in this place
It's like something's taken over you, since that day
Why do you sing with such a solemn face?
You're following; it's all you know to do
Following something broken and wild
You hold onto their example, set before you
Because you're really still a child
Too young, now nothing's gonna hold you
Your impetuous face is sweet
Your smiles are friendly and seem true
But I think inside, you're longing for direction
What should I say now? I don't know
Except that the last time I saw you
I didn't want to think you were that way, so
I thought for a long time about the truth
You always make me laugh,
You always make me smile
But there's something about that
I have to stop and think a while
Why do you always seem cheerful,
Yet behind that face so carefree
I wonder if there's really something woeful
Something you let no one see.
It's all a big mystery, behind each one
But finding the truth isn't difficult
I know you need help and that you can't run
And your lives are filled with tumult
Reaching you...
I want to at least point toward the Light
I need to
And make it, just a little bit, all right.
7 comments:
Very sweet. I think know who this is about.
You probably do. >.>
I find it ironic, though, that most of it was written the day we had our earthquake here in VA. Here I was, writing, writing, writing, and then *faint shudder*. It was pretty weird..and I didn't get to finish my poem because all the excitement broke my concentration.
If it's who I think it's for - wow. Wow, anyway! It's so beautiful - I was sitting here reading it on the verge of crying. Just... wow. Even if it's not who I think it's for - it still applies so amazingly.
Every word is so true; you took it right out of my heart. My heavy heart.
I wish... I wish I could, too.
Do you mind if I post this on my blog and give you the credit? I'm printing it, now. It's so beautiful, girl.
Hannah-It's about who you think. ;) Hence the nifty little 5top...figured it might tip you off slightly. Of course, Mom got it right away..so it's obviously way too easy to figure out. XD
1st 2 lines...Bleach...
2nd 3 lines...I think you know already...
3rd 3 lines...I'll Be There.
4th 2 lines...Maknae.
5th...3 lines? Smiles!!!
Awwww, it touches my heart that it moved you so...actually, your sentiments made me go outside and pray, which I've been meaning to do all day but haven't had that extra SHOVE to get me to go. XD
I know. My heart feels heavy, too. But it's not a sinful kind of heavy. It's a God-fearing heavy, a genuine desire to see Him glorified in the lives of others.
Go ahead!!! :D I'm glad that you like it so. Trust me, it came out of the depths of my heart...on the day of the earthquake here in VA, to be exact. I was listening to the Inception Soundtrack...the track entitled 'Time'. Invokes a creative feeling and made me sit back and actually think about things. Almost made me melancholy, so I had to get it out somehow! >.<
-Argentia
I know. *sigh*
This morning I got up at 5:12, and went out onto the back deck. It was very cold, and the moon was actually just going down behind the tree line; it was like someone had turned on a light! It was shining sooo brightly, and everything was this amazing ghostly color, and the stars were so vivid and bright - it was breathtaking. I stood out there and prayed - again - for people. It was a sad, yet... amazing feeling? You know what I mean? It's just... beautifully sad.
That was top notch. I enjoyed reading it and I don't normally go for poetry.
Hannah-Yep, I know beautifully sad!
Cylleruion-Well, I'm glad you liked it. Actually, I'm pretty surprised. Also, glad to see you're back from your vacation.
-Argentia
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